Showing posts with label Storytelling Week 4. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Storytelling Week 4. Show all posts

Thursday, September 11, 2014

Storytelling for Week 4: Valmiki and Sita


The day was coming to an end and the shadows of the trees along the riverbank began racing to the other side.  Crouched next to the gentle flow of the water was Sita. Valmiki observed her for a good while and realized she was crying. He then decided to console her and see if there was anything he could do to help her. As Valmiki came closer and closer he also realized she was with child. He  could not bear to have this poor abandoned women looking into the water contemplating her own demise.  Valmiki rushed to her side where he accidently startled Sita so bad she almost fell into the river. Valmiki quickly apologized for startling her so bad and then offered her his finest tree bark tunic.  She asked him “ who are you and why do you help a stranger in the woods?” Valmiki responded in an overly exaggerated tone“ I am the all mighty Valmiki and I have been called upon to care for you and your two unborn sons.” Valmiki stands there in front of Sita with his hands on his hips and chest puffed out like a gamecock. Sita smiled and could not contain herself from giggling. “ Thank you old and wise Valmiki, I have just been banished from my home in Ayodhya and have no place to go so you are quite the blessing.” Valmiki beckons Sita to follow him farther into the forest where they could start a new life as hermits. As they walked between the towering trees Valmiki was racking his brain for ideas on what he could make a new home out of, for he knew a termite house like his last home just would not do. A thousand years meditating and he lost all sense of reality. The odd couple eventually happened to come across a clan of hermits where they were welcomed with open arms. With spirits raised after finding an accepting community and having the joyful companionship of Valmiki, Sita was finally  beginning to accept her banishment. The hermits cooked for Sita and Valmiki and helped them make a cabin in the deep in the woods where nobody would disturb them.        



Authors notes: I chose to tell the story in a way in which Valmiki was more of a comedian yet still a wise man. I figured Sita would benefit more from having a companion that is lighthearted and fun to be around and in turn help ease the pain of being banished. File:Srishti Karta Bhagwan Valmeki Ji.jpg
Srishti_Karta Bhagwan Valmeki Ji, 8 March 2014, Sagarballu


Bibliography: Buck, William (1976). Ramayana: King Rama's Way